华慧考博英语:图表作文练习点评

2023-05-06 14:38点击次数:1938

整体09年网络使用高于07年,除了books与learning使用率有所下降;07年shopping比例最高,tv最低。这里边很多句子都不完整,就你用了从句后,句子的谓语动词没了。

       因为这个图其实跟上次类似的地方在于,就两个年份,所以是先讲的07,再到了09,同一年份就看同颜色的,年份比较就有了那两个特例。下边是范文:

       The bar chart compares the online activities people chose to do in a UK city in two particular years: 2007 and 2009.

  It is clear that in the year 2007,a comparatively large percentage of people used the Internet for some practical purposes: with the largest proportion of netizens using the internet for shopping (approximately 43%), then next is to buy books with 38%, followed by banking and learning. By contrast, a small proportion of people used the Internet for entertainment, constituting 25% (with video games and TV representing 15% and 10% respectively).

  In comparison, most of the activities attracted a larger rate of people in 2009, whereas shopping for books and learning experienced a marginal decrease, each accounting for 30% and 25%. In contrast, a significant growth can be seen in the calories of shopping, booking and watching TV, rising by around 10%.

Overall, the chart suggests that in the year 2009 online shopping was still the most popular online activity, while more people used the Internet for entertainment.

范文在分类的时候,就是分的实用和娱乐两个方向。

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